Kia ora. I am Sreesha from St Mary’s School. Your spooky haunted house story, really gave me the shivers. You painted a picture in my mind. Maybe next time you make it more detailed Please visit my blog here
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Kia ora. I am Sreesha from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteYour spooky haunted house story, really gave me the shivers.
You painted a picture in my mind.
Maybe next time you make it more detailed
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Sreesha